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Friday, January 06, 2012

Your Life is your Oyster


I sit by the window,
Into the night I stare.
With every element I view,
I see a secret bare.

The dark clouds in the sky
Talk about sadness and strife
But the glittering scattered stars
Give the darkness some life.

The fierce wind blowing across
Talks of the cold and difficult times
But the warm moonlight
Shows some hope in a simple mime.

The harsh rain splashing on the window
Shows how moments can cut through
But the sweet smelling mud
Shows the end is always good for you.

A melange of good and bad is life
I see through a smile and eyes with moisture.
The elements teach it at every step.
Your life is truly your oyster.

24 comments:

  1. WOW!!!! 434 views....Awesome your blog is getting popular day by day....:D

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  2. nuvvu ella ra think chesthavu...nakudda koncham tips eyachu kadha

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  4. amazing lines.........

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  5. Thanks, thanks a million everyone! =)

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  6. definately...

    "glittering scattered stars
    Give the darkness some life..." :-)

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  7. Lovely.
    It made me feel alleviated. <3 :)

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  8. WOW......That's so nice to read... PEACE to my HEART..!! Lovely Kritika.. :)

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  9. Nice Kriti.. You r like sweet smelling mud baby...

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  10. You are turning out to be my favorite poetess girl!

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  11. @James, thanks a lot mate. Means a ton! :)
    @Srinivas, Gradcie. =)
    @Afeefa, I am so flattered babe. :) :)

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  12. same comment as afeefa said... I am falling in love with your writings...loved it...

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  13. @Ravi, Lol. Nerpista le. Thanks. :) :)
    @Sana and Deepak, thanks so much. Means a lot. :)

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  14. awesome!!! never read this type poem

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  15. @Ravi, nerpista time unna appudu. :D
    @Shobana, Thank you so much dear. Means a lot. :)

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  16. Loved how you likened an event to another.
    especially this one :)
    "The harsh rain splashing on the window
    Shows how moments can cut through"

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