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Friday, March 23, 2012

A Boy

A boy holds a soft heart
Engulfed in a hard shell.
He smiles even if he's being ripped;
even if his heart is unwell.

You will never see him cry
but know that he's very weak.
He's ego is just a facade
behind which lies a worried child meek.

Oh, his ego is everything to him.
And thus he acts carefree.
But he is super possessive;
in seconds, high on a burning spree.

He will show loadsa attitude
but inside he's inferior.
He has doubts about himself
hidden in that coarse exterior.

All he needs is for some support,
For someone to share.
He's the guy we know to be harsh;
in reality the eden of care.

9 comments:

  1. I truly agreeing with u..... Good....

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  2. Wonderful Lines..............

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  3. zabardastt,,before reading it I thot of just liking it and not commenting on it,,but after I read,UR writings changed my view!!over all...its amazing...keep it up babes..

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  4. you don't need to use rhyming scheme all the time, the lines lose their value if we try to rhyme to much. well put, but content before rhyme. cheers!

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