I sit by the window,
Into the night I stare.
With every element I view,
I see a secret bare.
The dark clouds in the sky
Talk about sadness and strife
But the glittering scattered stars
Give the darkness some life.
The fierce wind blowing across
Talks of the cold and difficult times
But the warm moonlight
Shows some hope in a simple mime.
The harsh rain splashing on the window
Shows how moments can cut through
But the sweet smelling mud
Shows the end is always good for you.
A melange of good and bad is life
I see through a smile and eyes with moisture.
The elements teach it at every step.
Your life is truly your oyster.
great yar!
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ReplyDelete"glittering scattered stars
Give the darkness some life..." :-)
Nice.....Awesome...
ReplyDeleteLovely.
ReplyDeleteIt made me feel alleviated. <3 :)
Thank you everyone! :)
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ReplyDeleteNice Kriti.. You r like sweet smelling mud baby...
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ReplyDelete@James, thanks a lot mate. Means a ton! :)
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@Afeefa, I am so flattered babe. :) :)
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ReplyDelete@Ravi, Lol. Nerpista le. Thanks. :) :)
ReplyDelete@Sana and Deepak, thanks so much. Means a lot. :)
Eppudu nerpisthavu?
ReplyDeleteawesome!!! never read this type poem
ReplyDelete@Ravi, nerpista time unna appudu. :D
ReplyDelete@Shobana, Thank you so much dear. Means a lot. :)
Loved how you likened an event to another.
ReplyDeleteespecially this one :)
"The harsh rain splashing on the window
Shows how moments can cut through"